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life cycle of the honey bee.

life cycle of the honey bee. AB5r1
This graph represent the life cycel of the honey bee. It's clear from the showen diagrame that honey bee go through sex stages which takes 34 to 36 days. According to the showen picture, bee life cycel start when the femal lay one or two egg each three days, after that eggs will hatch between nine or ten days. Honey bees will take five days to go outside the egg, Then will start to grow slowely, Next nymph moulth which is the last part of the honey bees will start to grow three times bigger. Subsequently bees will become young adult emerges within nine days, and will take four days to maturity. Finaly, Honey bees are ready to beagin the life as an adult bee. In conclosin, Honey bees life cycel realy simillar to the humanbeen life cycel with small difrences, and meditation or thiking of this idea will give us the abilty to relise the powerfull and god greatness with thanking him for every thing in this life.
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cycel
of the honey bee. It's
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that honey bee go
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sex
stages which takes 34 to 36 days.

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picture, bee
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cycel
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when the
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femal
lay one or two egg each three days, after that eggs will hatch between nine or ten days. Honey bees will take five days to go outside the egg, Then will
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to grow
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nymph
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which is the last part of the honey bees will
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to grow three times bigger.
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bees will become young adult emerges within nine days, and will take four days to maturity.
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Finaly
, Honey bees are ready to
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beagin
the
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as an adult bee.

In
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conclosin
, Honey bees
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cycel
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realy
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simillar
to the
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humanbeen
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cycel
with
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small
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, and meditation or
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will give us the
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and god greatness with thanking him for every thing in this
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IELTS academic life cycle of the honey bee.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
169 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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