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The chart below shows the result of survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five Australian cities

The chart below shows the drinking habits of people in Australian cities. Overall, the habit of buying and drinking coffee and tea in Melbourne has become commonplace and popular among the people. The habits of consuming tea and coffee in Adelaide were less than in other cities. While Brisbane has a moderate amount of tea and coffee purchases compared to other cities. In Melbourne, 63 percent of people went for coffee or tea in the last 4 weeks. 42 percent of people have bought new coffee. In Adelaide alone 50% of people prefer to go to a cafe and buy instant coffee rather than coffee or tea. Solely 34 percent of people in Adelaide preferred to drink fresh coffee in last 4 weeks. In Brisbane, 56% of people had a high consumption of fresh coffee. The consumption of instant coffee in 5 Australian cities has fluctuated significantly. While buying new coffee rose and fell again
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the drinking habits of
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in Australian cities.

Overall
, the habit of buying and drinking
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coffee
and
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tea
in Melbourne has become commonplace and popular among the
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people
. The habits of consuming
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tea
and
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coffee
in Adelaide were less than in other cities. While Brisbane has a moderate amount of
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tea
and
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coffee
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purchases
compared to other cities.

In Melbourne, 63 percent of
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went for
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or
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tea
in the last 4 weeks. 42 percent of
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have
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bought
new
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coffee
. In Adelaide alone 50% of
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people
prefer to go to a
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cafe
and
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buy
instant
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coffee
rather
than
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coffee
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.
Solely
34 percent of
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people
in Adelaide preferred to drink fresh
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coffee
in last 4 weeks.

In Brisbane, 56% of
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people
had a high consumption of fresh
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coffee
. The consumption of instant
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coffee
in 5 Australian cities has fluctuated
significantly
. While buying new
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coffee
rose and fell
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again
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the result of survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five Australian cities

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