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The plan below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The top diagram presents the Grange Park in 1920 when it first opened and below the current same park. This report will highlight the similarities and differences between the diagrams. Past and present common elements, albeit in different measure, include rose gardens, seats, a fountain, a pond, and a stage. Noticeable newly today changes include a café, water feature, amphitheater and entrance underground car park. The previous rose gardens sit immediately northwest, northeast, and southwest of the park; however, the current plan incorporates two sets of gardens only: center of the park and to the left of the entrance from Arnold Avenue. Not only with the previous garden alter, but also the sets of seats which reduces to four sets only from five, the current location of seats surrounds the central rose garden. The stage for musicians changes to an amphitheater for concerts but the location remains unchanged. Now, new additions include a café which located southeast of the park that replaces a set of rose garden previously. Then, the children’s play area sits next to the café and the current public park has a water feature just positioned south of the children’s play area. Today, an additional entrance underground car park built just next to the water feature, but two elements removed from the park which is the fountain and glasshouse.

The top diagram presents the Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 in 1920 when it first
 opened and below the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmodernongoingpresentprevailing
current
 same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. This report will highlight the similarities and differences between the diagrams.

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different
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rose
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gardens
, seats, a fountain, a pond, and a stage. Noticeable newly
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today
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 include a café, water feature, amphitheater and entrance underground car park.

The previous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
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gardens
 sit immediately northwest, northeast, and southwest of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
; however
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmodernongoingpresentprevailing
current
 plan incorporates two sets of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
gardens
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only
: center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of the entrance from Arnold Avenue. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 with the previous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 alter, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 the sets of seats which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviates
reduces
 to four sets This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 from five, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmodernongoingpresentprevailing
current
 location of seats surrounds the central You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
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garden
. The stage for musicians This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 to an amphitheater for Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).concerts,
concerts
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but
 the location remains unchanged.

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Now
, new additions include a café which located southeast of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 that replaces a set of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
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garden
 previously. Then, the children’s play area sits next
 to the café and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmodernongoingpresentprevailing
current
 public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has a water feature This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 positioned south of the children’s play area. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
, an additional entrance underground car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 built This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
next
 to the water feature, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 two elements removed from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 which is the fountain and glasshouse. 