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The piechart of satisfaction on islands.

The piechart of satisfaction on islands. 7bAA
The two piecharts above show common aspects based on the poll, Targeted on guests. The former chart being informative for the unsatisfied reason of tourists. According from the chart, most concerned goes to the budget spending, for a half of them. Secondly, approximately a quarter, worried for amusement. There’s also reveals that 15 percentage unpleasant about the forecast and one of the ten doesn’t merely appreciate the meal. Hence by all these reasons might constitute this island slightly seems far for perfect. On the other hand, The latter chart contrastingly paraphrase the upside. The data illustrates over 40 percent pleased by locals, Around one third into their habits, While 11 percent pleased a welcoming and 12 percent prefer the tradition. In concluded, the visitors might seems like the townies and habitats of the destination, therefore, a cost of living lower their satisfaction as well as lack of fun activity.
The two
piecharts
above
show
common aspects based on the poll, Targeted on guests. The former chart being informative for the unsatisfied reason of tourists.
According from
the chart, most concerned goes to the budget spending, for a half of them.
Secondly
, approximately a quarter,
worried for
amusement. There’s
also
reveals that 15 percentage unpleasant about the forecast and one of the ten doesn’t
merely
appreciate the meal.
Hence
by all these reasons might constitute this island
slightly
seems far for perfect.
On the other hand
, The latter chart
contrastingly
paraphrase the upside. The data illustrates over 40 percent
pleased
by locals, Around one third into their habits, While 11 percent
pleased
a welcoming and 12 percent prefer the tradition. In concluded, the visitors might seems like the townies and habitats of the destination,
therefore
, a cost of living lower their satisfaction
as well
as lack of fun activity.
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IELTS academic The piechart of satisfaction on islands.

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