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The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The bar graph depicts the various causes of air pollution in China, America, japan and Australia for the year 2021. Overall, among the four countries, China has the highest number of ppm for all the causes of air pollution. The industry in China is the major cause of air pollution. As one of the different source of air pollution, the industry is the major pollutant in China and Japan with 80 ppm and about 45 ppm, respectively. While the America’s industry is only accounted for almost 30 ppm and roughly 18 ppm for Australia. The transport system is also a cause of air pollution and it is the major cause in America which is accounted for around 58ppm. Although, China has exactly 70 ppm in transportation which is higher than the three other countries. Japan has 30 ppm and around 18 ppm is accounted for Australia. The generation of electricity in China is the least cause of air pollution at approximately 58 ppm, whilst America is accounted for 30 ppm and Japan at around 15 ppm. However, the generated electricity is the major cause of air pollution in Australia with around 19 ppm, it only has 1 ppm difference with the other sources of air pollutant like transportation and the industry.
The bar graph depicts the various
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causes
of
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air
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pollution
in China, America,
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japan
and Australia for the year 2021.

Overall
, among the four countries, China has the highest number of ppm for all the
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causes
of
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air
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pollution
. The
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industry
in China is the
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major
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cause
of
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air
pollution.

As one of the
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different
source of
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air
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pollution
, the
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industry
is the
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major
pollutant in China and
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Japan
with 80 ppm and about 45 ppm,
respectively
. While the America’s
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industry
is
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only
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accounted
for almost 30 ppm and roughly 18 ppm for Australia. The transport system is
also
a
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cause
of
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air
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pollution
and it is the
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major
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cause
in America which is
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accounted
for
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around
58ppm.
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Although
, China has exactly 70 ppm in transportation which is higher than the three other countries.
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Japan
has 30 ppm and
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around
18 ppm is
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accounted
for Australia.

The generation of electricity in China is the least
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cause
of
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air
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pollution
at approximately 58 ppm, whilst America is
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accounted
for 30 ppm and
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Japan
at
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around
15 ppm.
However
, the generated electricity is the
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major
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cause
of
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air
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pollution
in Australia with
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around
19 ppm, it
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only
has 1 ppm difference with the other sources of
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air
pollutant like transportation and the
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industry
.
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IELTS academic The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
211 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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