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The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in someland between 1960 and 2000. Write a report and summaries important points.

The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in someland between 1960 and 2000. Write a report and summaries important points. l08K

The line graph illustrates that both gender's smoking rate in Homeland from 1960 to 2000. It is clearly shown that men smokers dropped throughout the whole period but was always at a higher level than female rates. On the other hand, the figure for women smokers increased until 1977 but then decreased for the remaining period. In detail, 600 men were smoking cigarettes in every 1000 in 1960. This number decreased to 500 by 1974 but it dramatically declined to 250 in 2000. In the meantime, the rate of smoking of women in 1960 was very low which was 80 out of 100. By 1968, the figure increased to 170 and more sharply rises to 320 in 1977. The rate of female smokers leveled out at 320 until 1984. However, the figure began to drop and declined by 200 in 2000.

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 low which was 80 out of 100. By 1968, the figure increased to 170 and more sharply
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 of female smokers leveled out at 320 until 1984. However
, the figure began to drop and declined by 200 in 2000. 