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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. 3dal
This double line shows the registrations of abroad and local stuclents in Australian universities over a ten year period. It is clear from the graph that the local students in Australian universities more than the overseas students. According to what is shown, overseas students in 2001 was 20000 total students and the commencing was nearly 10000. Then the total of overseas students increased to become 80000 and the commencing become 40000. While the local students was 400000 students in 2001 then it increased maildly to become 600000 students in 2006 and remained constant till 2010 while the commencing was waveing. To sum up, we could say that the total of overseas students from year 2001 till 2010 was increasing gradually while in the total of the local students it was increasing from year 2001 till 2006 then it remained unchanged, in addition to the commencing of the overseas was going up slightly from 2001 till 2009 then it became constant in 2009 and 2010 while it was vacillated for the local students.
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the registrations of abroad and
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local
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stuclents
in Australian universities over a
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ten year
period. It is
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clear
from the graph that the
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local
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students
in Australian universities more than the
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overseas
students.

According to what
is shown
,
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overseas
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students
in 2001 was 20000
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total
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students
and the
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commencing
was
nearly
10000. Then the
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total
of
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overseas
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students
increased to become 80000 and the
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commencing
become 40000. While the
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local
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students
was 400000
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students
in 2001 then it increased
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maildly
to become 600000
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students
in 2006 and remained constant till 2010 while the
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commencing
was
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waveing
.

To sum up, we could say that the
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total
of
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overseas
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students
from year 2001 till 2010 was increasing
gradually
while in the
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total
of the
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local
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students
it was increasing from year 2001 till 2006 then it remained unchanged,
in addition
to the
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commencing
of the
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overseas
was going up
slightly
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from 2001 till 2009
then it became constant in 2009 and 2010 while it
was vacillated
for the
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local
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students
.
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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