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The pie charts shows the exports of products between Vietnam and the United Stated in the year 1994

The pie charts shows the exports of products between Vietnam and the United Stated in the year 1994 Ql7D9

The pie charts shows the exports of products between Vietnam and the United Stated in the year 1994. Overall, the American goods exported worth was considerably more than that of Vietnamese exports and the majority of the exports from Vietnam was primary products whereas manufacturing goods were the major exports from the US. Looking into the first pie chart, the Vietnamese total export is worth of $52million(m). The majority of the Vietnamese exports goods were from primary industry(Agriculture and fishing), with coffee($23m) and Fruit and Vegetable being the main Exports. Rice and seafood were also important exports, contributing $4. 3 and $4. 4 million respectively. The least important were garments and other at $2 million each. In the second pie chart, it can be seen that more than half of the Americans exports were industrial products. The largest US export category was of Aircraft parts worth of $72 million, which were worth $20million more than total value of Vietnamese exports. This was followed by others products ($35million) and machinery($30. 5). Fertilizer, Cotton and Cars made up the remaining $34. 5 million for US total exports.

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