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The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. 718n
The pie charts give information about migration statistics which point out immigration and emigration data in The United Kingdom in 2007. According to the charts, six main reasons definition from the UK for migration. These factors are formal study, definite job, accompany/join, looking for work, no reason stated and others. These data obviously show that the major factor found a job. When the pie charts compare, the rate of finding a job was similar both immigration and emigration. While this rate was less than a third for immigration, emigration data was 29 percent. Apart from founding a job, the official study was a significant factor for immigration due to immigration statistics. Although this immigration data was over a quarter, the rate of emigration was a very small number. Another main factor was sought employment. The value was the only %22 for emigration whereas the grade was perceptibly lower at less than a fifth. As for other reasons, keep someone's company was a minitory rate for immigration and emigration. Although the majority of people did not give specify any reason and other reason for emigration, these grades explained the only %17 for immigration.
The pie charts give information about migration statistics which point out
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immigration
and emigration
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data
in The United Kingdom in 2007. According to the charts, six main
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reasons
definition from the UK for migration. These
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factors
are formal study,
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definite
job, accompany/
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join
, looking for work, no
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reason
stated
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and others
. These
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data
obviously
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show
that the major
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factor
found a job.

When the pie charts compare, the
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rate
of finding a job was similar both
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immigration
and emigration. While this
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rate
was less than a third for
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immigration
, emigration
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data
was 29 percent. Apart from founding a job, the official study was a significant
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factor
for
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immigration
due to
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immigration
statistics. Although this
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immigration
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data
was over a quarter, the
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rate
of emigration was a
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very
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small
number.

Another main
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factor
was sought
employment. The value was the
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only
%22 for emigration whereas the grade was
perceptibly
lower at less than a fifth.

As for other
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reasons
,
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keep
someone's
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company
was a
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minitory
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rate
for
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immigration
and emigration. Although the majority of
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people
did not give specify any
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reason
and other
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reason
for emigration, these grades
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explained
the
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only
%17 for
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immigration
.
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IELTS academic The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

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6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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