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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featuers, and make comparisons where relavant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. GQRg
The four pie charts show some main patterns of population rates in the two countries between 2000and2050. Overall, the population aged 15-59 years in 2 countries held the highest levels during the time. However there was an exception in the Yemeni population in 2000. In terms of Yemen’s population of ages, half of the population was elderly in 2000, a number that would see a drop to 37% in the next 50 years. Since an increase in 2000, the 15-59 years will account for 57. 3% of the population in 2050. The popularity of people who are 60 and above will marginally increase over 50 years (from 3. 6% to 5. 7%). As regards, there was a significant proportion of the people aged 15-59 years in Italy population rates in 2000. As a result, it is projected to have fallen by 15. 4% by the end of the period. In comparison, after doubling in 2000, the Italian elderly will represent almost half of the population. Finally, with 11. 5% of the population in 2050, children will be the least popular.
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of ages, half of the
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aged 15-59 years in Italy
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IELTS academic The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

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