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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in 1989.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in 1989. VkgQ
The given chart shows the different in average house rates from 1990 to 2002by comparing it with the rates during 1989 in five various cities. Overall, comparing with 1989, average house rates in most of the cities decreased during 1990-1995. However, the scenario changed later and average house price increased in all the cities except one city during 1996-2002. To begin, average house rates fall by 5% in one city during 1990-1995 compare to 1989. However, in other two cities price increased by around 2% and 3% respectively. In the remaining two cities average house rates declined by almost 7% during the year 1990-1995. Meanwhile, during the time period 1996-2002 average house rates decreased in one city (by 5%). Among the remaining cities the average house rates uplifted from approximately 2% to almost 12% by comparing with the price of 1989.
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from 1990 to 2002by comparing it with the
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during 1989 in five various cities.

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in most of the
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decreased during 1990-1995.
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price increased in all the
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except one city during 1996-2002.

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fall by 5% in one city during 1990-1995 compare to 1989.
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price increased by around 2% and 3%
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declined by almost 7% during the year 1990-1995.

Meanwhile, during the time period 1996-2002
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decreased in one city (by 5%). Among the remaining
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uplifted from approximately 2% to almost 12% by comparing with the price of 1989.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in 1989.

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