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The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. eyk7
The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the city of Spain named Castellon lately. Overall, there is a police station, new shopping center, and new shop now in place of the train station, tree and old market, and the road is declared now for pedestrians only. Moreover, the university, city center, and port remain the same. However, there is an addition of hall of residence, new covered market, new train station, tram line, bike rental scheme, cinema, and bars and clubs. The city center has remained the same, but there is a new addition of bike rental scheme is surrounded by a city center; in addition, the port has also remained there in the west, and there is a cinema on the left side and bars and clubs on the right side of the port. Furthermore, the university is also remained in its actual place, in the north. Another noticeable trend is that, in the west, the train station is demolished, and is shifted beside the city center with the addition of tram line; however, there is a police station now at the place of the train station. Moreover, in the west old market place is also changed, and there is now a new covered market instead of the old market, in the east. Furthermore, in the northeast, trees are chopped down to make a way for a new shopping center, and there is an addition of a hall of residence, in the northwest. By contrast, the road is declared for the pedestrian road only, and the movement of cars is not allowed now.
The maps illustrate the developments which took
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Castellon
lately.

Overall
, there is a police
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station
,
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new
shopping center, and
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new
shop
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now
in
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place
of the
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train
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station
, tree and
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old
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market
, and the road
is declared
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now
for pedestrians
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only
.
Moreover
, the university, city center, and port remain the same.
However
, there is an
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addition
of hall of residence,
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new
covered
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market
,
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new
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train
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station
, tram line, bike rental scheme, cinema, and bars and clubs.

The city center has remained the same,
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there is a
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new
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addition
of bike rental scheme
is surrounded
by a city center; in
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addition
, the port has
also
remained there in the west, and there is a cinema on the
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left
side and bars and clubs on the right side of the port.
Furthermore
, the university is
also
remained in its actual
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place
, in the north.

Another noticeable trend is that, in the west, the
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train
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station
is demolished
, and
is shifted
beside the city center with the
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addition
of tram line;
however
, there is a police
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station
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now
at the
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place
of the
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train
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.
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, in the west
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old
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market
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place
is
also
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changed
, and there is
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now
a
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new
covered
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market
instead
of the
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old
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market
, in the east.
Furthermore
, in the northeast, trees
are chopped
down to
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make
a way for a
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new
shopping center, and there is an
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addition
of a hall of residence, in the northwest. By contrast, the road
is declared
for the pedestrian road
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only
, and the movement of cars is not
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allowed
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now
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