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The pie charts show the Changes in the Average US Diet, between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts show the Changes in the Average US Diet, between 1990 and 2005. GNeKj
The given graph shows the distinction in the average American diet for two specific years: 1990 and 2005. Overall, the percentage of protein intake during these two distinct years prevailed consistency, while the proportion of sugar, fat, and starch oscillated relative to this time. Initially, the biggest adjustment that can be precisely seen between the two pie charts is an increase of the starch percentage with 22% in 1990 and 43% in 2005. In contrast, in 1990, the average American's dietary fat consumption was 42% until 2005 there was a  downward tendency to only 30%. Be equivalent to fat, in the US diet, the amount of sugar has plunged from 24% in 1990 to 15% in 2005. Otherwise, the percentage of protein plateaud with stopping at only 12% of the American diet in both two years.
The
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the distinction in the average American diet for two specific years: 1990 and 2005.

Overall
, the percentage of protein intake during these two distinct years prevailed consistency, while the proportion of sugar,
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fat
, and starch oscillated relative to this time.

Initially
, the biggest adjustment that can be
precisely
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seen
between the two pie charts is an increase of the starch percentage with 22% in 1990 and 43% in 2005.
In contrast
, in 1990, the average American's dietary
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fat
consumption was 42% until 2005 there was a
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downward tendency to
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only
30%. Be equivalent to
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fat
, in the US diet, the amount of sugar has plunged from 24% in 1990 to 15% in 2005.

Otherwise
, the percentage of protein
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plateaud
with stopping at
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only
12% of the American diet in both two years.

IELTS academic The pie charts show the Changes in the Average US Diet, between 1990 and 2005.

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