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The pie charts show information about total school spending between 1981 and 2001

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The pie charts give information about annual school expenditure in a school in three separate years. In general, the percentage of spending on insurance rose slightly, while expenses on other workers' salaries experienced a noticeable decrease. However,   teachers' incomes accounted for most of total school spending for the past three decades. Resources, which made up 15% of the total spending in 1981, accounted for a high of 20% in 1991, the figure which was then followed by 11% decrease in 2001. On the other hand, the percentage of other workers' salaries, fell to 15% in 2001, a decrease by 13% from what it was in 1981. The proportion of furniture and equipment, which equaled to 15% in the beginning fluctuated sharply, with the figure increasing to 23% in 2001, an increase by 18% from what it was in 1991. However, the smallest amount of the expenditure was on insurance in the last 30 years.
The pie charts give information about annual school expenditure in a school in three separate years.

In general
, the percentage of spending on insurance rose
slightly
, while expenses on other workers' salaries experienced a noticeable decrease.
However
,
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teachers' incomes accounted for
Consider using "most total" or "most of the total".
most of total
school spending for the past three decades.

Resources, which made up 15% of the total spending in 1981, accounted for a high of 20% in 1991, the figure which was then followed by 11% decrease in 2001.
On the other hand
, the percentage of other workers' salaries, fell to 15% in 2001, a decrease by 13% from what it was in 1981.

The proportion of furniture and equipment, which equaled to 15% in the beginning fluctuated
sharply
, with the figure increasing to 23% in 2001, an increase by 18% from what it was in 1991.
However
, the smallest amount of the expenditure was on insurance in the last 30 years.
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