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The pie charts provide the detail of farmland production in rwo distinct areas of the nation

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Overall, it id vivid that, the highest amount of eastern region production was meat. Neverthless, quentity of vegetables production in western region side was least. Noticeably, the perportion of Meat was similar in both side of region. In deailed analysis, the production of Meat in the both side Eastern and western region was more then one third. However, in case of production, it was 30 %, exceeding the figure of same in western region by 15 %. In contrast, the production of vegetables were least in western side area. Whearas, quantity in eastern region of vegetables were 20 %. While, production of grain in the western region was 45 %. However, in the side eastern area perportion of grain was 15 percent.
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region
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production
was meat.
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,
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quentity
of vegetables
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production
in western
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region
side was least.
Noticeably
, the
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perportion
of Meat was similar in both side of
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region
. In
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deailed
analysis, the
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production
of Meat in the both side Eastern and western
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region
was more
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one third.
However
, in case of
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production
, it was 30 %, exceeding the figure of same in western
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region
by 15 %.
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, the
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production
of vegetables were least in western side area.
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Whearas
, quantity in eastern
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region
of vegetables
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were
20 %.
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,
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production
of grain in the western
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region
was 45 %.
However
, in the side eastern area
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perportion
of grain was 15 percent.
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IELTS academic The pie charts provide the detail of farmland production in rwo distinct areas of the nation

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