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The pie charts illustrates the comparison of five different kinds of energy generation of France in the term 1995 and 2005.

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The pie charts illustrates the comparison of five different kinds of energy generation of France in the term 1995 and 2005. Overall, Coal was major contributor to the overall energy production of France in 1995 and 2005 respectively. Except petroleum and other kind, all other sectors noted a small change over the ten years. In detail, Gas, Nuclear, Other, and Coal saw an increase trend. In gas, the proportion rose by 29. 63% in 1995 to 30. 31% in the year 2005, while in nuclear, it accounted for 6. 40 % in starting and saw an approx 5% increase and climbed to 10. 10% in the year 2005. Besides this, other was comprised of only 4. 90% in the year 1995 and saw a 2-fold rises to 9. 10% in the year 2005. As regard, Coal, the major energy production contributor in France comprised of 29. 80% in 1995, which surged to 30. 93% in the year 2005. In both the years coal and gas together accounted for slightly more than half of the total energy production in both 1995 and 2005. On the other hand, only Petroleum saw downward trend. The initial figure for Petroleum in 1995 was 29. 27% and decline of approximately 10% was observed at the end of the year 2005.
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generation of France in the term 1995 and 2005.
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production of France in 1995 and 2005
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over the ten years.

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, and Coal
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an increase trend. In gas, the proportion rose by 29. 63% in 1995 to 30. 31% in the
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2005, while in nuclear, it accounted for 6. 40 % in starting and
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2005. As regard, Coal, the major
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production contributor in France comprised of 29. 80% in 1995, which surged to 30. 93% in the
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2005. In both the years coal and gas together accounted for
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production in both 1995 and 2005.

On the
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Petroleum
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downward trend. The initial figure for Petroleum in 1995 was 29. 27% and decline of approximately 10%
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrates the comparison of five different kinds of energy generation of France in the term 1995 and 2005.

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