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The following chart shows the spending on renewable energy in four different countries in 1975 to 2000.

The following chart shows the spending on renewable energy in four different countries in 1975 to 2000. KyWR3
The polyline chant ilustrates the money utilised by various nations on research for sustainable power in the span of 5 year (1975 2000). To begin with, the money used on exhaustible energy was higher in Switzerland than that of other nations, and it started increasing throughout the period and peaked out at 5. 1 dollar per person in 2000. Switzerland was followed by Denwark which was 1. 8. dollar per person in 1980, and it was increasing slightly after that inclined sharply from 2 dollars per person in 1995 to 3 dollar per person in 2000. Delving deeper, the exhaust of Spain and uk follow the opposite trend towards each other. From 1975 value Spain rising and reached to 1 dollar per person in 1985; However, UK wittnessed this amount 1980 then UK showed fluctuations between 0. 5 dollares per person to I doller per person until 2000. Moreover, the spending amount of UK decreased accounted for 0. 2 dollars per person in last year. Overall, the Switzerland and Uk followed upward trend as opposite to Spain and Denmark followed a downward trend in a given period of time.
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on exhaustible energy was higher in Switzerland than that of other nations, and it
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in 1995 to 3
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in 2000. Delving deeper, the exhaust of Spain and
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follow the opposite trend towards each other. From 1975 value Spain rising and reached to 1
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IELTS academic The following chart shows the spending on renewable energy in four different countries in 1975 to 2000.

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