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Integration promblems for people who are living abroad by their age level

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The chart explains about the integration problems for people aged 18-34, people aged 35-34, and people over 55, who are living abroad. Units are measured in percent. Making friends became the most integration problem that people aged 28-34 suffered and learning the local language became the most integration problem that people over 55 got. However, finding somewhere to live was the most integration problem that people aged 35-54 had. In people aged 18-34, making friend is suffered by around 40%-50% of people and higher than finding somewhere to live that is suffered by less than 40% of people. Nevertheless, on people aged 35-54, finding somewhere to live is suffered by more than the number of people that had a problem in making friends. Each of those problems are suffered by less than 40% people aged 35-54. Making friends and finding somewhere to live are problems that are suffered by around 20%-30%people over 55.
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problems
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people
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aged
18-34,
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people
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aged
35-34, and
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people
over 55, who are living abroad. Units
are measured
in percent.

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friends
became the most
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integration
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people
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aged
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and learning the local language became the most
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integration
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problem
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people
over 55
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finding
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somewhere
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was the most
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integration
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problem
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people
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suffered
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people
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finding
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friends
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people
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aged
35-54.

Making
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friends
and
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finding
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somewhere
to
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live
are
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problems
that are
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suffered
by around 20%-30%
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people
over 55.
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IELTS academic Integration promblems for people who are living abroad by their age level

Academic
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4 paragraphs
153 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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