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The given pie charts compare the visitor’s responses to a survey about the satisfaction levels of customer services at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and 2010

The given pie charts compare the visitor’s responses to a survey about the satisfaction levels of customer services at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and 2010 1o16y
The given pie charts compare the visitor’s responses to a survey about the satisfaction levels of customer services at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and 2010. It is worth-noticing that more and more customers were satisfied with the hotel’s service. While most visitors rated customer service as ‘satisfactory’ or ‘poor’ in 2005, there was a significant change in the rating of ‘good’ or ‘excellent’ 2010. In 2005, 45% of hotel guests were satisfied with the customer services, which was the leading choice in the questionnaires. Following that, the proportion of visitors rating poor and very poor is the popular selection at 21% and 15% respectively. By contrast, only 14% and 5% of guests rated good and very good. Over the following 5 years, people were more pleased with customer services. The percentage of guests rating good and very good witnessed a significant increase, jumping to 39% and 28% correspondingly. There was also a remarkable decline in the choice of satisfactory, at to 17%, down 3 times compared to the figure of the previous 5 years. Similarly, the number of people choosing poor and very poor dropped gradually, with figures reaching 12% and 4% respectively in 2010.
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pie charts compare the visitor’s responses to a survey about the satisfaction levels of
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customer
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services
at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and 2010.

It is worth-noticing that more and more
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customers
were satisfied
with the hotel’s
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service
. While most visitors rated
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customer
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service
as ‘satisfactory’ or
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‘poor’
in 2005, there was a significant
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change
in the rating of ‘
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good
’ or ‘excellent’ 2010.

In 2005, 45% of hotel guests
were satisfied
with the
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customer
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services
, which was the leading choice in the questionnaires. Following that, the proportion of visitors rating
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poor
and
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very
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poor
is the popular selection at 21% and 15%
respectively
. By contrast,
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only
14% and 5% of guests rated
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good
and
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very
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good
.

Over the following 5 years,
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people
were more
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pleased
with
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customer
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services
. The percentage of guests rating
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good
and
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very
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good
witnessed a significant increase, jumping to 39% and 28%
correspondingly
. There was
also
a remarkable decline in the choice of satisfactory, at to 17%, down 3 times compared to the figure of the previous 5 years.
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, the number of
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choosing
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poor
and
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very
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poor
dropped
gradually
, with figures reaching 12% and 4%
respectively
in 2010.
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IELTS academic The given pie charts compare the visitor’s responses to a survey about the satisfaction levels of customer services at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and 2010

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