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The pie charts illustrate the number of volunteers by various organizations in two different years. The date provided below were in the year 2008 and 2014.

The pie charts illustrate the number of volunteers by various organizations in two different years. The date provided below were in the year 2008 and 2014. eEl7W
The pie charts illustrate the number of volunteers by various organizations in two different years. The date provided below were in the year 2008 and 2014. Overall, in 2008, the highest number of volunteers was related to Educational organizations whereas in the year 2014, Ecological groups had the greatest number of proportions. It is also clear that in both years, Healthcare was the type of organization with lowest volunteers among others. In detail, in 2008, educational group was distinguished to have the highest percentages of volunteers among other organizations with nearly a quarter, closely followed by environmental groups through 21%. A slightly lower figure was noted among art organizations at 18%, whereas, similar figures were observed among sports and other group organizations sharing 15% each. Meanwhile, Healthcare society had the lowest number of volunteers at 7%. Six years later, a different pattern was observed in which environmental organizations and sports group had the highest proportion at 29% and 25%, respectively. A latter figure that was was noted for educational groups at 17%, which is slightly higher compare to Art organization at 12%. Two similar figures also were observed and the lowest proportion among others at 9% and 8% which noted for Healthcare and Other group organizations.
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2008 and 2014.

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whereas in the
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year
2014, Ecological
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had the greatest
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volunteers
among others.

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among art
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organizations
at 18%, whereas, similar
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group
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sharing 15% each. Meanwhile, Healthcare society had the lowest
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organizations
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had the highest proportion at 29% and 25%,
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for educational
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at 17%, which is
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate the number of volunteers by various organizations in two different years. The date provided below were in the year 2008 and 2014.

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