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The pie charts illustrate the household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in 2010

The pie charts illustrate the household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in 2010 DQMo

The given pie charts demonstrate the amount of consumption made by households in Japan and Malaysia in 2010. Overall, it can clearly be seen that households in both countries spent most of their budget for accommodation, food supplies, and other goods and services. In contrast, health care accounts for the least consumption for both countries. In terms of household in Japan, the two highest figures of consumption were held by food and other products and needs, which accounted for one-fourth and just below 30%, respectively. Moreover, the other two figures which were accommodation and transportation, stood slightly lower at around 20%, while the remaining percentage of 6% being held by healthcare, which was the lowest figure. Regarding the ones in Malaysia, the figure for accommodation makes up just above one-third whereas food and other supplies and services stood at just below 30%. In addition, the two lowest figures were transportation and health care services which accounted for exactly 10% and 3%, respectively.

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 pie charts demonstrate the amount of consumption made by households in Japan

and Malaysia in 2010.

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seen
 that households in both countries spent most of their budget

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other
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goods
 and services. In contrast
, health care

accounts for the least consumption for both countries.

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 below 30%,

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transportation, stood slightly
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