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The chart below gives information about the number of animals adopted from an animal rescue center in Madison, Wisconsin over a ten year period.

The chart below gives information about the number of animals adopted from an animal rescue center in Madison, Wisconsin over a ten year period. wkPm

The given bar graph illustrates the changes in the number of animal adoption which occurred in an animal rescue center in Madison, Wisconsin between 1990 to 2000. Overall, it can clearly be seen that the highest and lowest figures experienced a slight decrease during the earlier period whereas the other figure increased significantly. As a result, the figure for cat adoptions skyrocketed and surpassed the figure for those of dogs while the number of adoption for birds and reptiles remained as the lowest. In terms of the two figures that started at a much higher level in the beginning, the figures for dog and cat adoptions stood at approximately 550 and 310 in 1990, respectively. The number of dogs adoption experienced a gradual decrease to precisely 400 in 1998 and from this point onwards, the figure remained stable. In contrast, the figure for cat adoptions increased significantly over the given period to approximately 650, which results in being the highest figure at the end of the period. Regarding the other figure with lower level, the number of birds and reptiles adoption started at just above 100 in 1990. After which, it experienced several ups and downs throughout the years and stood at precisely 100 in 2000.

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