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Task -1 the table chart give the information about fair-trade label of coffee and bananas in 5 Europen countries in 1999 and 20004.

Task -1 the table chart give the information about fair-trade label of coffee and bananas in 5 Europen countries in 1999 and 20004. Lw8K3

The given tabular charts illustrates the information about the income, got by selling coffee and bananas in five European countries in particular two years 1999 and 2004. As an initial overview, it is apparently seen that in United Kingdom, it has only earned 1. 5 millions of euros in 1999. Conversely, it reached at a peak point that was 20 millions of euros after five years. However, Switzerland had profit of 3 millions of euros in 1999 but it had doubled in year 2004. Moreover, Sweden had received less in coffee trade which was 0. 8 millions of euros, in 2004 it had inclined by 0. 2 millions of euros. It is further clear from the sales of bananas that Switzerland had earned enough euros (15million) in 1999 but after four years it had trippled from the first year. Furthermore, Sweden and Denmark had received approximately same in both years. Overall, sales of coffee and bananas with fair-trade label at the end of the period in all countries.

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given
 tabular charts illustrates the information about the income, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 by selling coffee and bananas in five European countries in particular
 two years 1999 and 2004.

As an initial overview, it is apparently
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seen
 that A determiner is probably missing here: "in the United Kingdom".in the United Kingdom
in United Kingdom
, it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 earned 1. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 of euros in 1999. Conversely
, it reached at a peak point that was 20 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 of euros after five years. However
, Switzerland had profit of 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 of euros in 1999 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it had doubled in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2004. Moreover
, Sweden had received less in coffee trade which was 0. 8 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 of euros, in 2004 it had inclined by 0. 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 of euros.

It is further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the sales of bananas that Switzerland had earned This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 euros You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
(15million)
 in 1999 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after four years it had Possible spelling mistake found.crippledtripledtrippedrippledtippledt rippled
trippled
 from the first
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year
. Furthermore
, Sweden and Denmark had received approximately same in both years.

Overall
, sales of coffee and bananas with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
-trade label at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period in all countries. 