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The pie charts contrasts between electricity prodcution percentage in 1990 nas 2010 years by fuel source in France ther were coal, oil, natural gas hydo power and nuclear power

The pie charts contrasts between electricity prodcution percentage in 1990 nas 2010 years by fuel source in France ther were coal, oil, natural gas hydo power and nuclear power lRj29
The pie charts contrasts between electricity prodcution percentage in 1990 and 2010 years by fuel source in France those were coal, oil, Natural Gas Hydo Power and Nuclear power. Overall, the manufacturing of electricity in France The nuclear gas was increased considerably and Natural power delined the sharply. Over the two decades, meanwhile oil, and coal delined as the sam way and hydro power so was quite decreased in usage. In 1990, Nuclear power was anufactured at 17% of electricity on the contraty Nuclear power has increased stringthly in 2010. It was indicue 65% The natural gas was produced at at 28% in 1990. But it has decreased sharply to 4% in 2010. The coal and oil production was decreased as a sam at 13% in 2010 when look at the hydro power it has quite decreased 6% to 12% since 1990 to 2010.
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coal, oil, Natural Gas
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Hydo
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, the manufacturing of electricity in France The nuclear gas
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power
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delined
the
sharply
. Over the two decades, meanwhile oil, and coal
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delined
as the
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sam
way and hydro
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power
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In 1990, Nuclear
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was
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anufactured
at 17% of electricity on the
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Nuclear
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has increased
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stringthly
in 2010. It was
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65% The natural gas
was produced
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28% in 1990.
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decreased
sharply
to 4% in 2010. The coal and oil production was
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decreased
as a
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at 13% in 2010 when look at the hydro
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power
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decreased
6% to 12% since 1990 to 2010.
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IELTS academic The pie charts contrasts between electricity prodcution percentage in 1990 nas 2010 years by fuel source in France ther were coal, oil, natural gas hydo power and nuclear power

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