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The pie charts below shows degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990,2000and2010.

The pie charts below shows degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000and2010. 6Qej
The three pie charts elucidate information about the degrees obtained at National University in disparate fields in 1990, 2000 and after ten years. From the overall analysis, it is inferred that computer science was one of the degree which was distributed with the large proportion but also medicine degree, whereas the minimum preference was given to law degree by the National University in the three given years. It can be clearly seen from the illustration, in the initial year, the two degrees namely computer science and business was permitted with the same percentage, as 30. Rest of the two degrees as medicine and law was yield with per centum of 25% and 15%, in sequence. Turning towards the remaining pie charts in 2000, although 40% computer science degree was admitted by National University but after passing ten year this was 5% more than 2000, while medicine degree followed the opposite trend than this in 2000, it was 30% and in 2010, it was 25%. Moreover, in 2010, there was a significant difference between law and business which was given with the proportion of 20% and 10%, respectively. In the last year, an equal percentage was noticed both business and law degree, being 15%.
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obtained at National University in disparate fields in 1990, 2000 and after ten years. From the
overall
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that computer science was one of the
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degree
which
was distributed
with the large proportion
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but
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medicine
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, whereas the minimum preference was
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to
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law
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degree
by the National University in the three
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given
years. It can be
clearly
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seen
from the illustration, in the initial
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year
, the two
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namely
computer science and business
was permitted
with the same percentage, as 30. Rest of the two
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degrees
as medicine and
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law
was yield with per centum of 25% and 15%, in sequence. Turning towards the remaining pie charts in 2000, although 40% computer science
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degree
was admitted
by National University
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but
after passing ten
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this was 5% more than 2000, while medicine
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followed the opposite trend than this in 2000, it was 30% and in 2010, it was 25%.
Moreover
, in 2010, there was a significant difference between
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law
and business which was
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given
with the proportion of 20% and 10%,
respectively
. In the last
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, an equal percentage
was noticed
both business and
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law
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, being 15%.
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