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The pie charts below show the revenue sources for U.S highways for the last year and U.S highways expenditure by type last year

The pie charts below show the revenue sources for U. S highways for the last year and U. S highways expenditure by type last year Q82QX
The pie charts give a breakdown of the sources of income and the total money distributed among 6 different purposes for the U. S Highway last year. Overall, it is obvious that most of the budget are earned via the central government funds while tolls generated the least amount of income. Additionally, the capital outlay accounted for most of the expenditure and the opposite was true for debt interest. Among the income sources, the central government fund and the motor fuel taxes made the most contribution to the budget, with 26. 5% of the income funded by the government and the money made via fuel taxes were 0. 5% lower. Meanwhile, the taxes for motors only account for about half of the revenue compared with the fuel taxes. Money made by tolls was the lowest with 4. 3%, which is four times less compared to that of other revenue sources. Additionally, bonds earned just below 15% of the total income. In terms of the purchases, the capital outlay costed the highest amount of money with slightly less than half of the total spending. While 23. 8% of the budget was spent on maintenance and road services, which is only half compared to that of the capital outlay. Among the other spending, salary for the administrators and the patrols to ensure safety on the road accounted for 7. 9% and 8. 8% of the total spending respectively. Meanwhile, bond retirement expenditure took up about one fourth of the money spent on maintenance and services. Also, debt interest used up the least amount of money, with only 4. 7%.
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distributed among 6
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purposes for the U. S Highway last year.

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funds while tolls generated the least amount of
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, the capital outlay accounted for most of the expenditure and the opposite was true for debt interest.

Among the
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sources, the central
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fund and the motor fuel
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made the most contribution to the budget, with 26. 5% of the
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funded by the
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and the
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made via fuel
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were 0. 5% lower. Meanwhile, the
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for motors
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account for about half of the revenue compared with the fuel
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made by tolls was the lowest with 4. 3%, which is four times less compared to that of other revenue sources.
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, bonds earned
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below 15% of the
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income.

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, the capital outlay costed the highest amount of
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with
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spending. While 23. 8% of the budget
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on maintenance and road services, which is
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half compared to that of the capital outlay. Among the other spending, salary for the administrators and the patrols to ensure safety on the road accounted for 7. 9% and 8. 8% of the
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spending
respectively
. Meanwhile, bond retirement expenditure took up about one fourth of the
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spent on maintenance and services.
Also
, debt interest
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up the least amount of
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4. 7%.
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