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percentage of choices for car motorcycle bicycle in great Britain ,USA, Germany, France

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The Bar chart illustrates the percentages of choices for three modes of transport (car, motorcycle, bicycle) in Great Britain, USA, Germany and France. overall, Car was the most preferred type of transport, while bicycle was the second most in place and motorcycle was the least popular among those countries. Firstly, the popularity of car was highest in France which was more than 70%, while the least demand was recorded in Germany that was around 40%. However, the great Britain and USA showed similar pattern which accounted for 60% in both countries. On the other hand, motorcycle was the least popular choice in all four countries. Hence, USA had a slightly more demand for motor cycle compared to the other three countries that was around 30%. However the rates of young people who loved bicycle as a mode of transport was highest in Germany (almost 45%), the second highest was Great Britain that was nearly 30%. USA and France experienced the same trend of choice in terms of choosing bicycle that was around 10%.

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 in Great Britain, USA, Germany and France. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOverall
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, Car was the most preferred type of transport, while You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
bicycle
 was the second most in place and motorcycle was the least popular among those countries. Firstly
, the popularity of car was highest in France which was more than 70%, while the least demand was recorded
 in Germany that was around 40%. However
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 similar pattern which accounted for 60% in both countries.

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, motorcycle was the least popular choice in all four countries. Hence
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bicycle
 as a mode of transport was highest in Germany (almost 45%), the second highest was Great Britain that was nearly
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 that was around 10%. 

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