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The pie charts below show the popularity of different political parties in a countrt before and after the election. The election was won by the Conservative party and they formed government with the Liberal Democrats party.

The pie charts illustrates the people's support for various political parties before and after the June 2015 election. Overall, it can be seen that support for Labour Party increased significantly 12 months after the election. On the other hand support for conservatives declined at the end. In particular, at the beginning support for conservatives was 41%, 6 months after the election it increased slightly to 45% and 12 months after the election it declined to 35%. Besides, popularity for Green party is constant before and 6 months after the election and 12 months after the election decreased significantly to 5%. The support for Labour Party had been increased. Before election it was 26% and 12 months after the election it climbed up to 32%. On the other hand, popularity for Liberal Democrats was 19% initially and declined to 8% 12 months after the election. Undecided people are 4% before the election and it rose to 20% 12 months after the election.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the popularity of different political parties in a countrt before and after the election. The election was won by the Conservative party and they formed government with the Liberal Democrats party.

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