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the pie charts below show the global sources of greenhouse gas emissions in 2005 and 2015, as well as projections for 2025.

the pie charts below show the global sources of greenhouse gas emissions in 2005 and 2015, as well as projections for 2025. klEK
The pie charts below contain information on the four main sources of greenhouse gas emissions internationally. The first two charts refer to data from 2005 and 2015, whereas the final one is predictions about these sources in 2025. Firstly, electricity is the leading cause of greenhouse gas emissions in 2005 and 2015 occupying 38% and 36%, respectively. Furthermore, transportation is a close second to electricity in 2005, but in 2015 industry shows an increase in gas emissions. This suggests a decline in transportation and an upward trend for industry greenhouse gases. Finally, agriculture presents the least amount of gases generated for both 2005 and 2015. As far as projections are concerned, electricity is expected to continue leading as the main source of greenhouse gases, only slightly decreasing by 2%. As stated previously, industry will possibly surpass transportation in emissions, while the former will come in third in order. To conclude the analysis, agriculture gas emissions will most likely remain in last position out of the four sources with no significant changes. Overall, out of the mentioned sources emitting greenhouse gases, electricity is the most damaging one producing more than one third of the total amount. Following electricity, industry and transportation are combating for second place, and finally, the least of gas emissions come from agricultural activities.
The pie charts below contain information on the four main
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internationally
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, whereas the final one is predictions about these
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in 2025.

Firstly
,
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electricity
is the leading cause of
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greenhouse
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gas
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in 2005 and 2015 occupying 38% and 36%,
respectively
.
Furthermore
,
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transportation
is a close second to
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electricity
in 2005,
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in 2015
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industry
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an increase in
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gas
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emissions
. This suggests a decline in
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transportation
and an upward trend for
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industry
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.
Finally
, agriculture presents the least amount of
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gases
generated for both 2005 and 2015.

As far as projections
are concerned
,
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electricity
is
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to continue leading as the main
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,
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decreasing by 2%. As stated previously,
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will
possibly
surpass
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transportation
in
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, while the former will
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in third in order.
To conclude
the analysis, agriculture
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gas
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will most likely remain in last position out of the four
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with no significant
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changes
.

Overall
, out of the mentioned
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emitting
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,
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electricity
is the most damaging one producing more than one third of the total amount. Following
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,
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and
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transportation
are combating for second place, and
finally
, the least of
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gas
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emissions
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come
from agricultural activities.
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IELTS academic the pie charts below show the global sources of greenhouse gas emissions in 2005 and 2015, as well as projections for 2025.

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