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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. qlxa
The given maps present the two states of road path to the city hospital and nearby streets plan in 2007 and 2010. Overall, the access has undergone significant reformations, such as the relocation and resizing of bus station and two new roundabout construction. At the same time, Ring Road was not touched by  the renovation. Turning to the details, the car park was divided into two distinct places: one for staff and the other for public service. The staff car park remained at the same place where the original car park was, while the public one is located to the east from city hospital. Small bus stops were rebuilt into the big bus station, which is opposite to new staff car park.  There are also two new roundabouts on the crossing between outgoing from bus station roads and other city streets. It is clear from the map that Ring Road remained the same.
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path to the city hospital and nearby streets plan in 2007 and 2010.

Overall
, the access has undergone significant reformations, such as the relocation and resizing of bus station and two new roundabout construction. At the same time, Ring
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Road
was not touched by
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the renovation.

Turning to the
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, the
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car
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park
was divided
into two distinct places: one for staff and the other for public service. The staff
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car
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park
remained at the same place where the original
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car
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park
was, while the public one
is located
to the east from city hospital.
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bus
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stops
were rebuilt into the
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big
bus station, which is opposite to new staff
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car
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park
.  There are
also
two new roundabouts on the crossing between outgoing from bus station
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roads
and other city streets. It is
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clear
from the map that Ring
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remained the same.

IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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