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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. bwm6
The line graph shows the amount travellers visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. As the graph shows there are visitors staying on cruise ships, on island and total number of tourists. While the visitors staying on cruise and total number of tourists rose with some fluctuations, visitors staying on island remained unchanged before increasing slightly. It is clear from the graph that, visitors staying on island started at 0. 75 million in 2010 and remained stable the following year before increasing to 1. 5 million tourist from 2011 to 2013. Subsequently, the figure remained constant in following 2 years before fluctuating throughout the period from 2015 to 2017. Regarding visitors staying on cruise ships, began at 0. 25 million people in 2010. This figure rose to 0. 5 million in 2011, but decreased to the starting point in the next year. Afterward, the figure increased gradually to 2 million throughout the period from 2012 to 2017. By contrast, the total amount of visitors experienced an increase in the 7 year period. It started at 1 million in 2010 and rose gradually over the 5 year period. From 2015 to 2016 the figure remained unchanged before reached a peak of 3. 5 million in 2017.
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travellers
visiting a particular Caribbean
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island
between 2010 and 2017.

As the graph
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there are
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships, on
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island
and total number of tourists. While the
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visitors
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on cruise and total number of tourists rose with
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visitors
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.

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from the graph that,
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on
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at 0. 75
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million
in 2010 and
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stable the following
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increasing to 1. 5
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tourist from 2011 to 2013.
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constant in following 2 years
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from 2015 to 2017. Regarding
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on cruise ships, began at 0. 25
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in 2010. This
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rose to 0. 5
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in 2011,
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. Afterward, the
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throughout the
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from 2012 to 2017.

By contrast, the total amount of
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experienced an increase in the 7
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. It
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in 2010 and rose
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. From 2015 to 2016 the
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unchanged
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in 2017.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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