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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts describe the expenditures of household in a specific region in the year 1950 and year 2010. Overall, accomadation cost showed the significant decline. People Spey more than third of their income for food in 2010. In the year 1950, people spent just below three-quarter proportion of there income for housing facilities. This percentage dropped up to less than a quarter by 2010. However, the amount shared on education maintains around 6% over the 60 years. It is clear that, in 1950 the 11. 2% of food rate rocketed up to 34% in 2010. Nevertheless, 3. 3% of transportation cost increased notably up to 14% by 2010. In addition, according to the chart citizen of the region spent considerably more money on healthcare compair to previous year in the year 2010. Finally, all other family expenses (4. 4% in 1950) climbed to 19. 2% by 2010.
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1950,
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below three-quarter proportion of there income for housing facilities. This percentage dropped up to less than a quarter by 2010.
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, all other family expenses (4. 4% in 1950) climbed to 19. 2% by 2010.

IELTS academic The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

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