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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Bar graph provides the information about men and women who passed their driving test in one Asian Country from 1980 to 2010. Overall, Female participants passed their driving test with approximately 70% in the year 2000, while Male participants pass percentage approximately at 30% in the year 1980. Firstly, the starting period of 1980 women pass percentage was higher than men, it was around 50%. Pass percentage of women went to more than 50% in the year 1990. In the year 2000, women standing with high percentage in the graph with around 70%. There was slight decline after a decade in pass ratio(more than 60%) of driving test in the year 2010. Secondly, driving test of men was not that successful when compared to women. it went from around 30% in the year 1980 to approximately 50% in the years 2000 and 2010. Men driving test pass percentage was at around 40% in the year 1990.
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in one Asian Country from 1980 to 2010.

Overall
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2000, while Male participants pass
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approximately at 30% in the
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1980.

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pass
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went to more than 50% in the
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1990. In the
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2000,
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standing with high
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in the
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2010.

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1980 to approximately 50% in the years 2000 and 2010.
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1990.

IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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