Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The graph below show the Gross Value Added of Taiwan in two different industries from the year 2005 to 2009 in percentage.

The graph illustrates the Gross Value Added of Taiwan in two different sectors between the year 2005 and 2019 in proportion. Overall, both sectors increased tremendous but the Manufacturing sector raised comparatively more than service sector. In 2005, the Gross Value Added of Service sector was at 4 per cent which had experienced slight raise in the next year. Moreover, from 2006 to 2009 a noticeable increment in the Gross Value Added had been observed. On the other hand, the Gross Value Added of the Manufacturing sector was just over 6 per cent in 2005 and in the next year a slight raise about 2 per cent had been seen. In addition to this, the GVA of Manufacturing sector had remarkable increased nearly 16 per cent between the year 2007 and 2009.

The graph illustrates the Gross You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitpricerateamountcostexpense
Value
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsupplementarycombinedjoinedsupplementalextra
Added
 of Taiwan in two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sectors
 between the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2005 and 2019 in proportion. Overall
, both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sectors
 increased Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).tremendous,
tremendous
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the Manufacturing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
 raised comparatively
 more than service You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
. In 2005, the Gross You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitpricerateamountcostexpense
Value
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsupplementarycombinedjoinedsupplementalextra
Added
 of Service You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
 was at 4 per cent which had experienced slight raise in the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. Moreover
, from 2006 to 2009 a noticeable increment in the Gross You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitpricerateamountcostexpense
Value
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsupplementarycombinedjoinedsupplementalextra
Added
 had been observed
. On the other hand
, the Gross You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitpricerateamountcostexpense
Value
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsupplementarycombinedjoinedsupplementalextra
Added
 of the Manufacturing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over 6 per cent in 2005 and in the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 a slight raise about 2 per cent had been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
. In addition
 to this, the GVA of Manufacturing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregionpartdistrictzone
sector
 had remarkable increased nearly
 16 per cent between the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2007 and 2009. 