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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

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The two pie charts compare the amount of money spent on various expanses over a 60-years of period in a country. Overall, it is noticeable that, at the beginning of the period housing was the most significant household sector. In comparison, at the end of the period food became the largest household segment, while both two years health care contributed the least to the household segment. Looking at the details, as regards food, which accounted for 11. 2% in 1950, and experience a more than three-fold increase to 34% in 2010. Likewise, in 1950, the number of money spent on transport was 3. 3% and had a sharp growth at 14% after a 60 year of the period. Furthermore, in 1950, a minority percentage of money was expanditured on other segment, whereas there had been risen to a-fifth in 2010. After that, in terms of health care, which was the least proportion in the beginning of the period, and witness a inclined gradually by almost 2. 0% in 2010. Although, housing, which comprised approximately a three quarter in 1950, fell to 22% in 2010. Meanwhile, the proportion of education expenditure was roughly the same during the 60 year of period.

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