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The pie charts below show information about happeness of parents with children if different ages.

The pie charts below show information about happeness of parents with children if different ages. qRmwd
The pie chart compare the proportion of parents' satisfaction with young and teenaged children, in three different categories. Overall, parents with the youngest child live in a more happier life than those having older children. Also, it is clear from the charts that only a few percent of parents fell unhappy who have children in any ages. At first glance, it is noticeably that people owning juvenile kids are the happiest parents. These types of parents indicate 47 percent living in a blissful life. A half of them feel quite happy living with young children. Only three percent of parents have miserable life. The largest percentage of addescents' parents are satisfacted with their life in average level. They make up 61 percent of the given chart. The fairly happy parents constitute 35 percent of it. And an unhappy people with teenage children account for only 4 percent.
The pie chart compare the proportion of parents' satisfaction with young and
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children
, in three
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,
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parents
with the youngest child
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from the charts that
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only
a few
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parents
fell unhappy who have
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children
in any ages.

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people
owning juvenile kids are the happiest
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parents
. These types of
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indicate 47
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living in a blissful life. A half of them feel quite happy living with young
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children
.
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three
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percent
of
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parents
have miserable life.

The largest percentage of
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parents
are
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satisfacted
with their life in average level. They
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up 61
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fairly
happy
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constitute 35
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people
with teenage
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account for
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show information about happeness of parents with children if different ages.

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