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The pie charts below show exports from various EU countries India to China in 2000 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts below show exports from various EU countries India to China in 2000 and 2011. 856dm
The above illustration describes about the EU Exports of commodities to India and China in 2010 and 2011. On an average, Austria and Finland stands in the least spot whereas Germany and United Kingdom takes the major part in the exports. Firstly, when we compare the exports of the India in these two years, we can observe Finland is the only country which is same as 2%. United Kingdom has taken a major downfall from 29% to 13% whereas Germany has increased by 10%. Comparing main countries like Austria, France, Netherlands, Spain, Sweden and Italy, the former ones has very less increment as 1% but the latter has 2% growth. Coming to other countries we can see overall as 4% as upfront. On the other hand, China has its own up’s and down’s when we compare with Indian growth. As we can observe Italy, Netherlands, Spain is decreased by 1%, while Austria and Belgium remains same as 2% and 5% respectively. Provided that, Finland, France, Sweden and United Kingdom made a huge downfall of 4%, 3%, 5% and 2%. Not only Germany recorded a rapid change from 38% to 48% but also other countries made a 4% increment. To summarize, majority countries in India has reported gradual increase in exporting the goods from 2010 to 2011 when compared to countries of China.
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about the EU Exports of commodities to India and China in 2010 and 2011. On an average, Austria and Finland stands in the least spot whereas Germany and United Kingdom takes the major part in the exports.

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which is same as 2%. United Kingdom has taken a major downfall from 29% to 13% whereas Germany has increased by 10%. Comparing main
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like Austria, France, Netherlands, Spain, Sweden and Italy, the former ones has
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less increment as 1%
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when we compare with Indian growth. As we can observe Italy, Netherlands, Spain
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in India has reported gradual increase in exporting the
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from 2010 to 2011 when compared to
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of China.
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