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The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. qV6dp
The pie charts compare the students who read articles from journals every week by every student, students of Ph. D. , and junior lecturers. Overall, it is clear that the Ph. D. students read the most articles followed by junior lecturers and all students read the fewer articles. In terms of 12 plus articles, 80% of students of Ph. D. read articles more than 12, and 24% junior students read the same quantity of articles which is double from all students with 12%. Regarding 6 to 11 articles reading, 75% of junior students read these which is the highest, and 21% all students read the same quantity. However, only 15% of students read the same quantity of articles. With regards to less than 5 articles, 67% category lies in all students, and this is the greatest whilst 5% Ph. D. students read same quantity followed by only 1% of junior students read the same quantity of articles.
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