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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. r8YdL
The line graph above illustrates the average expenses spent on cellphone and residential phone services by the customers in the USA yearly, during the years 2001 to 2010 respectively. The units for the cost are measured in dollars. According to the graph, in the year 2001 money spent on cellphone services was very low at about 200 dollars whereas, the money spent on residential services was at a peak, it was just under 700 dollars. This is how it started off and as years passed by increase in investment of the people in cellphone services gradually kept increasing, on the other hand, people's investment in residential services kept declining to a point where the ratio of money spent on both the services was equal at about 600 dollars in the year 2006. From 2007 onwards, more and more consumers spent money on cellphone services and the expenditure reached up to 800 dollars by the year 2010, whereas the expenditure on residential services dropped down to 400 dollars. Overall, as the years passed consumers preferred paying for cellphone services over residential services.
The line graph above illustrates the average expenses
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spent
on cellphone and
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residential
phone
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services
by the customers in the USA yearly, during the years 2001 to 2010
respectively
. The units for the cost
are measured
in dollars.

According to the graph, in the
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year
2001
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money
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spent
on cellphone
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services
was
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very
low at about 200
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dollars
whereas, the
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money
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spent
on
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residential
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services
was at a peak, it was
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just
under 700
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dollars
. This is how it
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started
off and as years passed by increase in investment of the
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people
in cellphone
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services
gradually
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kept
increasing,
on the other hand
,
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people
's investment in
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residential
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services
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kept
declining to a point where the ratio of
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money
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spent
on both the
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services
was equal at about 600
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dollars
in the
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year
2006.

From 2007 onwards, more and more consumers
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spent
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money
on cellphone
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services
and the expenditure reached up to 800
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dollars
by the
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year
2010, whereas the expenditure on
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residential
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services
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dropped down
to 400 dollars.

Overall
, as the years passed consumers preferred paying for cellphone
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services
over
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residential
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services
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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