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The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Taking all students' reading first, 67 percent of them read 1 to 5 articles. And also, according to the given details, only 12 percent of students read over 12 journal articles. Furthermore there are 75 percent of junior lectures chose to read around 6 to 11 articles. However, only 1 percent of junior lectures read 1 to 5 articles. Surprisingly, considering the PhD students at the university have given their attention towards journal articles than other students and junior lectures. 80 percent of PhD students read over 12 articles. And there are only 5 percent of PhD students read 1 to 5 articles. These details can prove which category of students are eager to read journal articles. Although junior lectures did read more articles, PhD students were the one who read a lot of journals articles.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

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