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The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed. WwB5
The pie chart illustrate the data on Consumption of resources and spending on (Food, clothing, Housing, Transport and others) by different countries in the world and how world population was distributed. Data is calibrated in percentage(%). Overall, population of worlds highly distributed by Asia is 57% and too least is other countries. The most of the people spending and Consumption of resources more in others that is 40% and less number of people are spending in clothing. Europe $ USA consumption of resources is 60%. Firstly, The world population in Europe and America having the same with 14% and Africa with 10% and other countries are with less population that is 5%. Asia has the huge amount of population with 57%. Secondly, USA and Europe people are consumption of resources is 60% is very high compared to other with 40%. Finally, people In world spending on clothes 6% and in housing 12%. 10% of people spending on transport and 24% in food which is second highest in the world and 40% of people spending on others.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.

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6.5
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