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The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.

The pie charts depict information about the living costs, the distribution of population, and the consumption habit based on countries. Overall, USA and Europe consume more than the other countries although the percentage of the population is quite low. Moreover, miscellaneous spending is the largest proportion among others. To begin with, even though Asia is the biggest population, it only consumes approximately less than 40% showing a contrast difference with the USA & Europe with only 28% and consume two-third of resources. In addition, Africa and the other country's population at a rate of 10% and 5% respectively, also utilize much less than 40% of resources. If we elaborate on this spending, most of the cost is for the other expenses, followed by food and transportation at 24% and 18%. However, although housing and clothing are quite expensive, that only account for 18% in total showing the same amount of transport expenses. In conclusion, the distribution of resources between countries is unequal.
The pie charts depict information about the living costs, the distribution of
population
, and the consumption habit based on countries.
Overall
, USA and Europe consume more than the other countries although the percentage of the
population
is quite low.
Moreover
, miscellaneous spending is the largest proportion among others.

To
begin
with,
even though
Asia is the biggest
population
, it
only
consumes approximately less than 40% showing a contrast difference with the USA & Europe with
only
28% and consume two-third of resources.
In addition
, Africa and the other country's
population
at a rate of 10% and 5%
respectively
,
also
utilize much less than 40% of resources.

If we elaborate on this spending, most of the cost is for the other expenses, followed by food and transportation at 24% and 18%.
However
, although housing and clothing are quite expensive, that
only
account for 18% in total showing the same amount of transport expenses.
In conclusion
, the distribution of resources between countries is unequal.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.

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