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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts compare the proportion of water which is used in industry, agriculture, and houses in six different regions of the globe. It is measured in percentages. Overall, it is clear that the utilization of water in agriculture is the highest in Central Asia, Africa, Southeast Asia, and South America, whilst in North America and Europe industrial use is the greatest. However, domestic use is the lowest among all other purposes in each country. In terms of agriculture, the usage of water is contributed to 88%, 74%, 81%, and 71%, in Central Asia, Africa, Southeast Asia, and South America respectively, while in North America and Europe the figure for this category is 39% and 32% sequentially. Regarding industry, the greatest amount of water is used in North America and Europe. Meanwhile, the rate of this category is the least in the other four countries. Moreover, domestic usage is similar in Central Asia and Southeast Asia which is just 7%.
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is the lowest among all other purposes in each country.

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to 88%, 74%, 81%, and 71%, in Central Asia, Africa, Southeast Asia, and South America
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, while in North America and Europe the figure for this category is 39% and 32%
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in North America and Europe. Meanwhile, the rate of this category is the least in the other four countries.
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