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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates what Anthropology graduates decided to do after they had finished undergraduate degree course. And the table illustrates how much they are paid after five years of working. Evidently, over 50% of the Anthropology graduates choose to work on a full-time basis. Nevertheless, 12% of them did not find an occupation after graduate, and 15% of them took part in a part-time job. Moreover, there are 13% of them choose to go on further study, while 8% of these people decided to study full time. Finally, there are still data of 8% of the student remains unknown. After working for five years, 80% of those who working as freelance consultants as well as those who work for the government had earned over $75, 000. Additionally, 50% of the latter one had earned over $100, 000. Whereas, those who work for the private companies had earned least, with 55% had earned over $75, 000 and 30% over $100, 000. Overall, most of the graduates found an occupation or go on further study. And after five year of working, their payment of work are varies due to different sort of employment.
The chart illustrates what Anthropology
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graduates
decided to do after they had finished undergraduate degree course. And the table illustrates how much they
are paid
after five years of working.

Evidently
,
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over
50% of the Anthropology
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graduates
choose to
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work
on a full-time basis.
Nevertheless
, 12% of them did not find an occupation after
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graduate
, and 15% of them
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took part
in a part-time job.
Moreover
, there are 13% of them choose to go on
further
study, while 8% of these
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people
decided to study full time.
Finally
, there are
still
data of 8% of the student remains unknown.

After working for five years, 80% of those who working as freelance consultants
as well
as those who
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work
for the
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government
had
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earned
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over
$75, 000.
Additionally
, 50% of the latter one had
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earned
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over
$100, 000. Whereas, those who
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work
for the private
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companies
had
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earned
least, with 55% had
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earned
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over
$75, 000 and 30%
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over
$100, 000.

Overall
, most of the
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graduates
found an occupation or go on
further
study. And after five year of working, their payment of
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work
are varies due to
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different
sort of employment.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after five years.

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