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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The diagram illustrates the whole process of making instant noodles where it is shown the manufacturing pattern which is divided into eight stages from the factory to the super market shelf. Overall, it is a complex process that perform under a repeated designed way for making every single instant noodles to take it to the consumer. At the beginning, flour pours in the storage silos. Then, it gets mixed with water and oil in the second stage. Afterwards, it goes though the rollers over the dough sheets and cute into long strips going through the dough strips. In the 5th stage, noodles gets circular shape in the noodles discs section. Further, the process consists of cooking the noodles in the oil and drying it out where it gets ready to move to the next stage. In 7th stage, vegetables and spices are added to the noodles when all the things are kept into separate cups. In the final stage, we can see a process that consists of packaging and delivering to the market shelf to offer the consumer.
The diagram illustrates the whole
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of making instant
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noodles
where it
is shown
the manufacturing pattern which
is divided
into eight
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stages
from the factory to the
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super market
shelf.

Overall
, it is a complex
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process
that perform under a repeated designed way for making every single instant
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noodles
to take it to the consumer.

At the beginning, flour pours in the storage silos. Then, it
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gets
mixed with water and oil in the second
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stage
. Afterwards, it goes
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though
the rollers over the dough sheets and cute into long strips going through the dough strips. In the 5th
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stage
,
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noodles
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gets
circular shape in the
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noodles
discs section.
Further
, the
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process
consists of cooking the
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noodles
in the oil and drying it out where it
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gets
ready to
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move
to the
next
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stage
. In 7th
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, vegetables and spices are
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added
to the
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noodles
when all the things are
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kept
into separate cups. In the final
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stage
, we can
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see
a
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that consists of packaging and delivering to the market shelf to offer the consumer.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

Academic
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3 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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