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The pie charts above demonstrate the responses to a questionnaire asking 100 Customers to the Parkway hotel on how they favored its service.It is clear that within only 5 years from 2005 the hotel had showed shown greater results with more and more Visito

The pie charts above demonstrate the responses to a questionnaire asking 100 Customers to the Parkway hotel on how they favored its service. It is clear that within only 5 years from 2005 the hotel had showed shown greater results with more and more Visito BJWeV
The pie charts above demonstrate the responses to a questionnaire asking 100 Customers to the Parkway hotel on how they favored its service. It is clear that within only 5 years from 2005 the hotel had showed shown greater results with more and more Visitors voted positively. In 2005, there were 15% of the stayers in the Parkway Hotel rated the service as terribly poor, with 21% more felt that it was poor. Contemporarily, the percentage of people voted satisfactory was 46%. Those who thought it was good was 14%, but only 5% of the customers viewed the service as excellent. In 2010, the people ticking Parkway Hotel service poor and very poor, both dropped by 9%. On the other hand, the proportion of the guests rating it almost tripled at 39% within 55 years. Visitors who felt satisfied enough with the service accounted for just 17% in 2010, but those rating it excellent rose significantly up to 28%.
The pie charts above demonstrate the responses to a questionnaire asking 100 Customers to the Parkway
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on how they favored its service.

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5 years from 2005 the
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shown greater results with more and more Visitors voted
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rated the
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, with 21% more felt that it was
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.
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voted satisfactory was 46%. Those who
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was 14%,
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5% of the customers viewed the
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as excellent.

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ticking Parkway
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, both dropped by 9%.
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IELTS academic The pie charts above demonstrate the responses to a questionnaire asking 100 Customers to the Parkway hotel on how they favored its service. It is clear that within only 5 years from 2005 the hotel had showed shown greater results with more and more Visito

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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