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The graphs show enrolment in different colleges in the Higher Colleges of Technology in 1999 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given

The graphs show enrolment in different colleges in the Higher Colleges of Technology in 1999 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given doDeX
The graphs depict the statistics of graduates in the Higher Colleges of Technology in 1999. Overall, the bar chart gives the information about the number of students from different colleges, the second bar graph represents the relation between levels and genders while the pie chart shows the total number of graduates. According to the data, the most popular college that graduated 547 people is “Dubai Women’s”. A little less popular is “Dubai Man’s” which gave the education to 426 students. The least popular is “Ras Al Khaimah” for males, where only 102 students graduated in 1999. Schools in other cities had a relatively similar number of graduates, so colleges in Ai Ain and Sharjah had about 160 graduates while in Abu Dhabi there were about 270 students for men and women. The most popular document of knowledge was a certificate, which was got by 50% of all graduates, but about 700 of them were girls and 550 boys. Diploma was equally popular among genders, so 27% got it which is nearly 350 boys and 340 girls. Higher Diploma had 20% of popularity and mostly women received it. Bachelor degree had only 3% of female students, which stands for about 50 humans.
The graphs depict the statistics of
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in the Higher Colleges of Technology in 1999.

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, the bar chart gives the information about the number of
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students
from
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colleges, the second bar graph represents the relation between levels and genders while the pie chart
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shows
the total number of graduates.

According to the data, the most
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college that graduated 547
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people
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is
“Dubai Women’s”. A
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little
less
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popular
is “Dubai
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Man
’s” which gave the education to 426
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students
. The least
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is “
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Khaimah
” for males, where
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only
102
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graduated in 1999. Schools in other cities had a
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graduates
,
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colleges in
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Ain and
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Sharjah
had about 160
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graduates
while in Abu Dhabi there were about 270
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students
for
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men
and women.

The most
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document of knowledge was a certificate, which was
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got
by 50% of all
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graduates
,
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about 700 of them were girls and 550 boys. Diploma was
equally
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among genders,
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27%
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350 boys and 340 girls. Higher Diploma had 20% of popularity and
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women received it. Bachelor degree had
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3% of female
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students
, which stands for about 50 humans.
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IELTS academic The graphs show enrolment in different colleges in the Higher Colleges of Technology in 1999 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given

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