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The pie chart shows the percentage of the energy produced from different sources in a country from 1985 to 2003.

The pie chart shows the percentage of the energy produced from different sources in a country from 1985 to 2003. dlXa7
The pie chart ilillustrat that the amount of energy produced from different types of sources like, natural gas, coal, hydrogen, nuclear, and other renewable in a country from 1985 to 2003. Overall, at the beginning of the period, other renewable produced the least energy, while oil was the most significant produced energy in both years. At the first glance, it can be seen from the pie charts that natural gas accounted for 13% in 1985, and experienced an increase of 10% in 2003. The energy produced from coal was 8% and had a slight growth of 5% in 2003. Whereas other renewable made up 8% of produced energy in 1985 respectively, and this figure rose to 4% in 2003. Oil, which contributed almost 52% and this figure fell to 39% in 2003. However, nuclear was at 22% and decreased by 17% of energy in 2003. In contrast, contributed from hydrogen remained constant in both years at 4%.
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, while oil was the most significant
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in both years. At the
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from the pie charts that natural gas accounted for 13% in 1985, and experienced an increase of 10% in 2003. The
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energy
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produced
from coal was 8% and had a slight growth of 5% in 2003. Whereas other renewable made up 8% of
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in 1985
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, nuclear was at 22% and decreased by 17% of
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in 2003.
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, contributed from hydrogen remained constant in both years at 4%.
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows the percentage of the energy produced from different sources in a country from 1985 to 2003.

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