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The line graph illustrates the quantity of people per day travel by wokers in the UK using there different forms of transport namely Car, Bus and Train from 1970 to 2030.

The line graph illustrates the quantity of people per day travel by wokers in the UK using there different forms of transport namely Car, Bus and Train from 1970 to 2030. 9wKej
the maps describe the changes taking place from 1995 to present. Generally picture is that the village witnessed the disapearance of most trees and the mergence of playfiel for example, in the northeast while the forest park and farmland vanished and was replaced by golf and tennis. small houses and road was contructed in the northwest. shop and fish market disappear is substituted by restaurant and apartments in the southeast. Fishing port vanished in the south. Althougt in the southeast the hotel, cafe stayed unchanges over the time. besides come into being carpark lies in the proximity to a hotel. in particul the road system is also expanded in the southwest direction making it more convenient for people to travel.
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taking place from 1995 to present.

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picture is that the village witnessed the
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disapearance
of most trees and the
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mergence
of
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playfiel
for example
, in the northeast while the forest park and farmland vanished and
was replaced
by golf and tennis.
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small
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houses
and road was
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contructed
in the northwest.
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shop
and fish market disappear
is substituted
by restaurant and apartments in the southeast. Fishing port vanished in the south.
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Althougt
in the southeast the hotel,
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cafe
stayed
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unchanges
over the time.
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besides
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come
into being
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carpark
lies in the proximity to a hotel.
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in
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particul
the road system is
also
expanded in the southwest direction making it more convenient for
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people
to travel.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the quantity of people per day travel by wokers in the UK using there different forms of transport namely Car, Bus and Train from 1970 to 2030.

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