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Number of cases of x disease in someland

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The line graph represents changes of the number of cases of X disease in Someland for 10 years, between 1983 and 1992. Overall the number of cases was almost stable from 1983 to 1988 and then peaked in 1989 before it fell again until it disappeared in 1992. The number of cases initially stood at about 100 in 1983 where it stayed constant for 2 years. From 1985 to 1987 the number rose to 200 cases slowly, but then it reduced to 100 again in 1988 right before it boomed to 400 cases by the year of 1989, at this point it was the maximum number of cases that Someland witnessed in those 10 years. Furthermore the number experienced a slight decrease in the next 2 years and a sudden slump to zero case in 1992 when Someland was finally free from the X disease. In conclusion, the cases of the X disease in Someland fluctuated between a 100 and 400 cases for a decade before it vanished in 1992.

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